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June 6th, 2007 at 4:20 pm
The dialogue exchange here is extremely clever. You are doing a fantastic job working with carrying a story in which one character hears completely different dialogue than another in the same exchange. Well done.
June 18th, 2007 at 10:14 am
It was cetainly my biggest challenge — conveying the idea that Al doesn’t see the “real world” using naturally-flowing dialogue. That’s an issue that I take particularly personally because (of course) that part was my responsibility.
Mike’s pencils speak for themselves, I think. I can’t sing his praises enough. So it was critical that the dialogue not come across as forced or false.